Split Indecision, by Pierre Bateau (iUniverse, 2006)
Indecision is a bold experiment in fiction.
The story is innovative, and comes to a well-integrated conclusion,
but I feel it actually represents a novel in progress. We expect to
see this kind of story in draft stages, when we can then guide the
writer to make the story more clear.
In fact, my immediate impression was to categorize this as a Print
on Demand book by an author bent on capturing the audience through
an early date rape scene which brings a character to question
whether she is a lesbian. While this may not seem consequential,
many new authors feel that such scenes are necessary to make their
book popular. (This outlook is not recommended.)
This was only a fleeting thought on my part, however. I wasn't
convinced the book needed more work until I realized that the author
has asked the reader to do almost all of the work.
We have sequential first person accounts labelled by various
character's names. This does provide good characterization, but it
becomes hopelessly confusing for a reader who wants to understand
how the characters relate to each other. Since the author simply
provides "snippets" or first person snapshots for each character, it
is up to the reader to remember who the characters are and figure
out what their role is in the story.
So, in this review, I have to assign this to the "Needs another
Draft" category. Once another draft is done, and it includes the
missing parts, I will read it again with interest. During this
revision, I would recommend using a single point of view. Then, if
multiple views are necessary, they can be worked in later on without
confusing the reader.
However, the book is a bold experiment - no less so than
stream-of-consciousness writing was in years past, so maybe we can
stand back and watch literature encompass this television-like
procession of images. In that case, my viewpoint will be seen as
regressive and old fashioned, but that's just the risk I'll have to
Bruce Cook, Ph.D.
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